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Fairy-Land"Fairy-Land"Your words of Wisdom,Makes Shakespeare sound unsure.Your touch of freedom,Makes Romeo shiver with fear.Your strength of character,Makes Jack proceed to stare.For their love story,Was only but a legend.For when they heard of us.They knew we were sent,from Heaven.For our Dreams came true,Since fate brought us together.
Death"Death"Death as I see myself letting go.Watching as I drift above.Not knowing where I am, or how I got there.Feelings of Loneliness, I try to overcome.The presence of Love, Start to drift in.As I begin to recognize, the shadows I have loved.I start to understand, what's happening to me.For the Angel of Death, sheds her wings;To bring in light, for me to see.As I go through, I look behind.Relizing I led, a good full life.But now that Death is at my side.I PONDER............then I go through.
Life-Time MemoriesLife-Time Memories"Christmas is here, for the first time,Not being able to say my Goodbye's.I cherish the memories, we shared together.The good ones and the bad ones.Realizing I made my last memory, the day that you died.Message on the answering machine, wishing me a Happy Birthday.Then realizing as I wait for your Birthday to come around,To hear the dreaded sound that you have passed away.I still celebrated your Birthday;even though, it wasn't the same.I felt your presence all around me,letting me know everything will be ok.Knowing your last words you breathed were "Tell Marly I Love Her." So, that's the last memory of you and me.I Love You Dad.Christmas is here, for the first time.Not being able to say my Goodbyes.
Ship of Dreams"Ship of Dreams"Radiant Ship, glowing with encouragement.Bound for America in a mere five days.Man, Woman, child in their Glory of triumph.All full of Wonder ofThe Ship that couldn't sink.The Ship that Couldn't Sink.Devotion Greeting through embody,knowing not what would become of them,for they all knew.It's The Ship that couldn't sink.The Ship that couldn't sink."Iceberg, Straight ahead!"Shattered all hopes, Shattered all Dreams.Mixed minuts went by, Ocean started swallowing.Reliziation hit, they're going under.In The Ship that couldn't sink.The Ship that couldn't sink.So many people, so few boats.Some woman, children survived.Few men able to reunite.Wary through passion, vanishing through midair.Promises kept, memories through past lives, whispers of good-byes.In The Ship that couldn't sink.The Ship that couldn't sink.